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Every great love starts with taking a chance
But in the end something always goes wrong
It's not always full of perfect romance
Not all lovers are destined to belong
So many obstacles are in their way
But they always seem to find each other
Alas! Problems arise and she can't stay
Another chance, one after another
She had hoped the third time would be the charm
But it was just another chance wasted
Yet again her fragile heart was in harm
She only wished that it could have lasted
No more tries, they have run out of chances
The only thing left is stolen glances
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First real attempt at iambic pentameter outside of school.. I've been in a very Shakespearean poem writing mood lately.. anyway, enjoy!!
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Mood: Adoration ~AnnieOhh624 Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice use of iambic pentameter (:
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~MoonGazer606 Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much :) :huggle:
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